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Authors: Bruce Judisch

The Journey Begun (37 page)

 

Coming Soon…

 

The Word Fulfilled

Book Two

A Prophet’s Tale

 

 

A city will be obliterated in forty days.

Unless…

 

Israel.
Dark forces dog the prophet’s every step on his journey to deliver a message of hope to evil Assyria.

 

Nineveh.
When a girl’s coming-of-age ritual goes terribly wrong, the unlikely love of a young man becomes her only hope. But is it enough?

 

Nimrud.
The Igigi, the great gods of the Assyrian pantheon, are on the move. As their omens of discontent throw a nation into turmoil, the king and his vizier scheme to evade their wrath.

 

Three separate acts converge at a critical point on the stage of history, sweeping to a tumultuous conclusion.

 

Relive the world of eighth-century
b.c.

with Jonah, Ianna, and Ahu-duri as they struggle

with their roles in bringing God’s word to fulfillment.

 

The story you thought you knew…

A prophet’s ageless tale of danger, redemption, and love

 

For more information:

www.brucejudisch.com

 

 

 

About the Author

 

 

Bruce Judisch,
a Senior Information Operations Analyst for the Joint Information Operations Warfare Center, has been writing for many years.

“A Prophet’s Tale,”
Bruce says, “is a story we
thought
we knew—an ageless tale of rebellion and intrigue, love and faith, and spirits in battle over a destiny of a man. I wrote the series to portray that the actions the Lord calls us to always affect those around us, never us alone. If you’ve heard the story of Jonah, you may know about the storm and the great fish, but what of the consequences of Jonah’s rebellion? What of the broken relationships? The lost opportunities? My motivation for writing this trilogy is to tell the prophet’s story in a uniquely fresh, entertaining, and thought-provoking way.”

Bruce is the author of another novel,
Ben Amittai: First Call,
the prequel to
The Journey Begun,
which introduces the trilogy on Jonah, and also more than 18 Bible book study booklets, as well as topical studies on the Seven Churches of Revelation, the Resurrection, and Discerning God’s Will.

Bruce holds an MA in Information Systems and Computer Resources Management; an MA in Management; a BA in Russian; and an A.A. in Communications Processing Management.

Bruce lives in Texas and is currently working on
The Word Fulfilled,
the sequel to
The Journey Begun.

 

For more information:

www.brucejudisch.com

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