The Dungeons of Torgar (26 page)

(
149
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(
150
) Replaced ‘Principalin or more’ with ‘Principalin or higher’. Replaced ‘Tutelary or more’ with ‘Tutelary or higher’. Replaced ‘skills, or’ with ‘skills or’.

(
151
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
152
) Replaced ‘click’ with ‘
click
’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
153
) Replaced ‘have a bow and’ with ‘have a Bow and’.

(
155
) Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘more that’ with ‘more than’.

(
159
) Replaced ‘blood-stains’ with ‘bloodstains’.

(
162
) Replaced ‘Drakkar sword’ with ‘Drakkarim sword’ to reflect
standard usage
.

(
163
) Replaced ‘bowfire’ with ‘bow-fire’.

(
164
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(
169
) Replaced ‘counter-attack’ with ‘counterattack’. Replaced ‘blood-stained’ with ‘bloodstained’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
170
) Replaced ‘bushes and walk’ with ‘bushes, and walk’.

(
172
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
176
) Replaced ‘woodsmoke’ with ‘wood smoke’.

(
177
) Changed the list of items to initial capitals. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Black Key (Backpack Item)’ with ‘Black Key (Special Item)’ to harmonize with
Section 285
. Replaced ‘pockets and’ with ‘pockets, and’. Added ‘Kika are a form of currency used in the Darklands and the Drakkarim nations. Each coin is worth one-tenth of a Gold Crown and ten Kika take up the same space as one Gold Crown in your
Belt Pouch
.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.

(
179
) Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’. Replaced ‘Drakkar fortress’ with ‘Drakkarim fortress’ to reflect
standard usage
. Replaced ‘a group of knghts appears’ with ‘a group of knights appear’.

(
181
) Replaced ‘water-course’ with ‘watercourse’. Replaced ‘inky-black’ with ‘inky black’. Replaced ‘forego’ with ‘forgo’.

(
182
) Replaced ‘your flesh and’ with ‘your flesh, and’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’. Replaced ‘Kai training’ with ‘Magnakai training’.

(
185
) Placed the choice leading to
Section 302
first in the list.

(
187
) Replaced ‘the fight last’ with ‘the fight lasts’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
188
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
190
) Replaced ‘remaining strength and’ with ‘remaining strength, and’.

(
191
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.

(
192
) Replaced ‘neuro-vascular’ with ‘neurovascular’.

(
193
) Replaced ‘Imposter!’ with ‘Impostor!’. Replaced ‘hornet's nest’ with ‘hornets' nest’.

(
195
) Replaced ‘somersaults and’ with ‘somersaults, and’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(
198
) Replaced ‘unmistakeable’ with ‘unmistakable’.

(
200
) Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’.

(
205
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
206
) Replaced ‘Tutelary or more’ with ‘Tutelary or higher’. Replaced ‘skill or have’ with ‘skill, or if you have’.

(
207
) Replaced ‘encouragement, then’ with ‘encouragement, and then’.

(
208
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.

(
209
) Replaced ‘Tutelary or more’ with ‘Tutelary or higher’. Replaced ‘swop’ with ‘swap’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’. Replaced ‘Kai training’ with ‘Magnakai training’.

(
210
) Replaced ‘delete this weapon’ with ‘delete this Weapon’. Replaced ‘A shower of icy-blue sparks explode’ with ‘A shower of icy-blue sparks explodes’.

(
211
) Replaced ‘counter-attack’ with ‘counterattack’. Replaced ‘war horns’ with ‘war-horns’. Replaced ‘shield wall’ with ‘shield-wall’. Replaced ‘battle frenzy’ with ‘battle-frenzy’.

(
212
) Replaced ‘crossbows, then’ with ‘crossbows; then’.

(
213
) Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’.

(
214
) Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
219
) Replaced ‘Half-way’ with ‘Halfway’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’.

(
220
) Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’. Replaced ‘Kai training’ with ‘Magnakai training’.

(
222
) Replaced ‘you, he’ with ‘you; he’.

(
224
) Replaced ‘Primate or more’ with ‘Primate or higher’.

(
230
) Replaced ‘clang’ with ‘
clang
’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
240
) Replaced ‘Primate or more’ with ‘Primate or higher’. Replaced ‘Magnakai rank’ with ‘Kai rank’ for consistency with the rest of the series. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’. Replaced ‘Kai training’ with ‘Magnakai training’.

(
242
) Replaced ‘blood-lust’ with ‘bloodlust’. Replaced ‘curled-up’ with ‘curled up’. Replaced ‘Principalin or more’ with ‘Principalin or higher’. Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’. Replaced ‘Kai training’ with ‘Magnakai training’.

(
244
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
245
) Replaced ‘win and’ with ‘win, and’. Replaced ‘If the fight lasts longer’ with ‘If you win, and the fight lasts longer’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.

(
250
) Replaced ‘forego’ with ‘forgo’.

(
252
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
260
) Replaced ‘crosslegged’ with ‘cross-legged’.

(
261
) Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’.

(
263
) Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.

(
265
) Replaced ‘toll of your’ with ‘toll on your’. Replaced ‘fifth and’ with ‘fifth, and’.

(
266
) Replaced ‘the quarry and’ with ‘the quarry, and’.

(
270
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘counter-attack’ with ‘counterattack’.

(
271
) Changed the list of items to initial capitals. Replaced ‘their muscular bodies’ with ‘his muscular body’.

(
272
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(
273
) Replaced ‘Tutelary or more’ with ‘Tutelary or higher’. Replaced ‘Kai training’ with ‘Magnakai training’. Replaced ‘skill or have’ with ‘skill, or if you have’.

(
277
) Replaced ‘backpack items or weapons’ with ‘Backpack Items or Weapons’. Replaced ‘blanket and’ with ‘Blanket, and’.

(
278
) Replaced ‘Thank the Gods’ with ‘Thank the gods’.

(
280
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
283
) Replaced ‘have a bow and’ with ‘have a Bow and’.

(
284
) Replaced ‘war horn’ with ‘war-horn’.

(
287
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
289
) Replaced ‘rope and wind’ with ‘rope, and wind’.

(
291
) Replaced ‘Drakkar spy’ with ‘Drakkarim spy’ to reflect
standard usage
.

(
293
) Replaced ‘bonuses’ with ‘missile bonuses’. Replaced ‘. If you possess the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery,’ with ‘and’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.

(
296
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
298
) Replaced ‘Cenerese druids’ with ‘Cenerese Druids’. Replaced ‘new-found’ with ‘newfound’.

(
300
) Replaced ‘enemy have’ with ‘enemy has’.

(
301
) Replaced ‘Adamas's army’ with ‘Adamas' army’ in both the text and the illustration's caption. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
303
) Replaced ‘Cener druids’ with ‘Cener Druids’.

(
304
) Replaced ‘rockface’ with ‘rock-face’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘one hand (a sword, mace, axe, dagger, short sword or warhammer’ with ‘one hand (i.e. a Sword, Mace, Axe, Dagger, Short Sword, or Warhammer’ and added ‘You cannot make use of a Shield. All weapon-like Special Items should be treated just as normal weapons for determining whether or not you may use them in this combat (e.g. you cannot use the Silver Bow of Duadon but you may use the Sommerswerd).’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.

(
305
) Replaced ‘your shoulder and’ with ‘your shoulder, and’.

(
306
) Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’.

(
308
) Replaced ‘behind and’ with ‘behind, and’.

(
309
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
317
) Replaced ‘backpack and weapons’ with ‘Backpack and Weapons’.

(
319
) Replaced ‘have a bow and’ with ‘have a Bow and’.

(
320
) Replaced ‘Elite’ with ‘Élite’.

(
323
) Replaced ‘hill-top’ with ‘hilltop’.

(
326
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘as though his body was’ with ‘as though his body were’.

(
327
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
328
) Replaced ‘Half-way’ with ‘Halfway’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’.

(
329
) Replaced ‘speed and’ with ‘speed, and’. Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘rustles, then’ with ‘rustles, and then’.

(
330
) Replaced ‘heads’ with ‘tails’. Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’.

(
336
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(
338
) Replaced ‘turns and’ with ‘turns, and’.

(
339
) Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’.

(
340
) Replaced ‘fifth and’ with ‘fifth, and’.

(
341
) Replaced ‘zig-zag’ with ‘zigzags’. Replaced ‘and a growing mound of rubble threatens’ with ‘and a growing mound of rubble threaten’.

(
344
) Replaced ‘Zaggonozod’ with ‘Zagganozod’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’.

(
345
) Replaced ‘out-distance’ with ‘outdistance’.

(
346
) Replaced ‘Welcome Pathfinder’ with ‘Welcome, Pathfinder’. Replaced ‘report, then’ with ‘report, and then’.

(
347
) Replaced ‘The shouts of the Drakkarim and the rain of their arrows unnerves’ with ‘The shouts of the Drakkarim and the rain of their arrows unnerve’.

(
348
) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘Drakkar Assault-Captain’ with ‘Drakkarim Assault-captain’. Replaced ‘Drakkar officer’ with ‘Drakkarim officer’ to reflect
standard usage
.

(
349
) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(
350
) Replaced ‘shadow gate’ with ‘Shadow Gate’. Replaced ‘book 11’ with ‘Book 11’.

(
Combat Rules Summary
) Replaced ‘cross reference’ with ‘cross-reference’. Replaced ‘top of chart’ with ‘top of the chart’. Replaced ‘fall to 0’ with ‘falls to 0 or below’. Replaced ‘Kai Disciplines’ with ‘Magnakai Disciplines’. Replaced ‘Pick number from’ with ‘Pick a number from the’. Replaced ‘Turn to Combat’ with ‘Turn to the Combat’. Replaced ‘to random number’ with ‘to the random number’. Replaced ‘when ENDURANCE’ with ‘when the ENDURANCE’. Replaced ‘ignored, only’ with ‘ignored; only’.

Quite a number of contributors to Project Aon have reported inconsistencies regarding the use of words such as Drakkar across the series. After much research into the usage of Drakkar/Drakkarim, Nadziran/Nadziranim, and Ligan/Liganim across the books, we have decided to standardise the usage of the words in the following ways, which represent majority usage:

• noun (s.): Drakkar
  
• noun (pl.): Drakkarim
  
• adj: Drakkarim
  

• noun (s.): Nadziran
  
• noun (pl.): Nadziranim
  
• adj: Nadziranim
  

• noun (s.): Ligan
  
• noun (pl.): Liganim
  
• adj: Liganim
  

All of the other words ending in -im either already conform to these rules (i.e. gazim, kuzim, lajakim, rekenarim, Sharnazim, and Tefarim) or cannot be conclusively tied to Darkland languages (e.g. Ghagrim).